Monday, February 27, 2012

Morning Rush At West Comments

Rating: 3.5

Have to wake up,
before the tiredness,
of yesterdays fades away.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 27 February 2012

A panorama through window thought, a modern poem, depicts the reality, immensity is there in your poem and it sounds good, keep it up and i hope further more like this thanx 2 your nice creation, dear veeraiyah subbulakshmi/ please read my poems comment and vote

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Sankaran Ayya 27 February 2012

Sweet burdens of every morning and many a time bring tears in our eyes when you find difficult to cope up with the morning scores. Only ladies can portray these feelings in poems. Good poem Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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