Monday, May 22, 2023

Morning Rain And Song Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.7

In the stillness of the morning's dew,
a song of love begins to brew,
the birds chirp along with our tune,
a symphony that plays till noon.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Sabahat Batool 23 May 2023

Beautiful and wonderful composition song of love that starts with our morning of life and ends with evening gusts when we breath our last

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 May 2023

Sweet and romantic, with lovely scenes.

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M.J. Lemon 22 May 2023

I think the first two lines in the last verse are most profound. When the rain stops, much often departs, including the good things. Great verse, Asim.

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Anjandev Roy 22 May 2023

Simply exceptional.....thanks for sharing.....my friend....

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Sandra Feldman 22 May 2023

This glorious poem wins, many stars from the poetic firmament that light the way to better days.

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Sandra Feldman 22 May 2023

poem wins,

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Sandra Feldman 22 May 2023

So shear poetic delight. Written with love in all it depth, beauty and might. Poetry, that moves the heart, giving life a brand new start!

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Martinez Salotori 22 May 2023

Great flow and nice rhyme. In the stillness of the morning's dew, a song of love begins to brew.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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