Saturday, June 26, 2010

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A GOOD MAN STARES BLANKLY AT THE WALL
A HOLLOW STALKING
MARKING HIS HEART
MAKING HEAVY IT'S EVERY RISE
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Guy Richard Baldwin
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Preetam Shetty 28 June 2010

In such little words, , , , , you have spoken the universe As Terence states this is one of your best pieces which can be felt deep within.

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this is the best of your poetry I have read so far, there is a haunting theme of unrequited love and an element of intrigue from shop counter to wine not consumed.

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Paul Judges 26 June 2010

Well written, Guy

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