Morning Mind Comments

There are two problems with commenting on poems at POEMHUNTER: These tiny boxes are confining, you can't spread OUT your thoughts; and you can't see the whole poem while writing a comment. I have to go back to the poem and check lines for accuracy in my references and quotations.And you frequently circle back to the beginning in your closing, as you do in this poem. I think that circling back is a wonderful touch for closure and wholeness. It's the Ouroboros image. I'll write my comment through email because I like this poem