Friday, May 10, 2013

Morning Melody Comments

Rating: 5.0

In blush of dawn when breeze is calm
A high pitched anthem trills and rolls

Slumbers sweet stirred up and flipped
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Yasmin Khan
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Chandra Thiagarajan 13 May 2013

The melody of the singing bird at dawn captures the heart! A lovely poem to enjoy!

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Allemagne Roßmann 12 May 2013

The 5th stanza of dopplets are corerstone.They have enough material to enchant an avid reader.

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Hazel Durham 12 May 2013

A melody of serenity with great rhythm and flow so lovingly penned!

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Joseph Anderson 11 May 2013

A lovely way to start the day and a very lovely poem to tell us.Sweetly and touchingly penned A 10 FOR YOU

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Wahab Abdul 10 May 2013

so sweet and so rhythmical is the the poem that fragrance of loveliness i smell from a distant land..

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 May 2013

nice steps eases the tongue and mind lovely lovely poem

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Lovely poem Jasmeen.

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Yasmin Khan

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