Friday, April 18, 2014

Morning In The Tavern Comments

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The messenger took up the cup, quaffed the wine,
and called for more.
Every Sufi in the tavern stretched out his empty cup.
When an angel in the morning leads the way,
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Daniel Brick
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Seamus O Brian 06 October 2016

Daniel, thank you for your enlightening notes. I am learning much from your writings, and greatly appreciate your work and effort. Like most skills in life, emulation plays an important part, and I am thankful that you have so invested your craft into this site. Thanks again, and great work!

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Mihaela Pirjol 21 December 2014

I especially enjoyed this line - Carouse with fresh wine and new poems - I really like it!

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Nika Mcguin 27 April 2014

This is interesting, It's such a vivid read. In fact it feels like some lost scene from a movie. I can't quite explain why, but it sits well with me lol. So I'm adding this one to my list ^^ ~Nika

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Nathan Martin 18 April 2014

I think this poem is very easy to relate with. Also well written with brevity. Like the use of Daniel.

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