Thursday, October 8, 2009

Morning Has Broken Comments

Rating: 5.0

My morning was broken
And what a surprise
A lovely parade
Right before my eyes
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Marilyn Lott
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Kesav Easwaran 09 October 2009

i am able to notice the adolescent morning of your byegone days breaking out in your poem lines there Marilyn...sweet words from a good poetic heart...thanks...10

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David Harris 08 October 2009

Marilyn, this is quite beautiful, I loved every line. It made feel like I was sitting in the sun on a warm summer day. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Marilyn Lott

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