Sunday, November 6, 2016

Morning Grief Comments

Rating: 5.0

the woods are dark and magical
the meadows damp with dew
but still the hills cry emptiness
beneath the awesome blue
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 08 November 2016

So beautifully written. There's always a morning after darkness. Things look blank n empty often but love colors our life n make it worth living. Awesome imagery. A journey from dark to light depicted well.10 for sure.

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Barry Middleton 08 November 2016

Love is all that matters. Without it the beauty in the world means little. Thanks as always.

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Bill Cantrell 06 November 2016

Nice work, yes indeed..without someone to share it seems that life's beauty is a cause for grief, really good work

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Barry Middleton 06 November 2016

Thank you very much Bill. Glad you liked it.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 06 November 2016

Nature's muse, beautifully knitted to a rhythmic poem. Thank you for sharing. X

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Barry Middleton 06 November 2016

Thank you. I appreciate your reading and commenting on my poem.

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