Monday, May 9, 2016

Morning Glory Comments

Rating: 5.0

A timorous ray starts off the day
From seeds of darkness, light grows
Clear, blue firmament looks so bright
To the early riser, a pure delight
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Nosheen Irfan
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And melancholy melts like snow Wow! Wonderful line! Wonderful poem!

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M Asim Nehal 18 May 2016

And with the arrival of sun melancholy melts like snow. Superb imagery and wonderful flow, I really enjoyed it.10+++

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Spock The Vegan 17 May 2016

You have captured the thrill of the early morning. Good job.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 May 2016

Beauty of nature is very special and this ever touches minds. Morning beauty clarifies chirping of birds. This is entirely very fantastic poem shared really.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 May 2016

Soft buds open to soak the light of love! ! Nice piece of work.

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Barry Middleton 09 May 2016

I love morning and you have captured the feel of it. Thanks as always.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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