Sunday, June 24, 2018

Morning Fog Comments

Rating: 4.9

Morning fog hovers
Over a field of rows corn
Sun dissipates fog.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rob Lamberton 23 January 2023

I like your connection to farming and nature!

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Aarzoo Mehek 23 January 2023

Beautiful vivid image of sun oeeping through the clouds

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Rebecca Navarre 23 January 2023

Bring such heart warming memories of my Grandparents farm! .. Beyond #ing! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 23 January 2023

Such beautifully beautifully painted imagery! .. Ever so heartfelt! ..

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Anjandev Roy 02 August 2019

Wonderful imagery. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Jankovic Zoran 16 March 2019

Great. And what do we feel? Heavy wet air. We breathe hard, but we look forward to the sun that will bring a bright day.

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Khairul Ahsan 21 July 2018

Just in three lines and twelve words, you have drawn a beautiful imagery! Very well done, Rose.

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Irfanulla Shariff 15 July 2018

Such a succinct, lovely poem... beautiful imagery. Well done, Rose.

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Geetha Jayakumar 05 July 2018

Beautiful write in few lines. Images changes within sometime. Loved reading it.

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Captain Cur 04 July 2018

Amazing images and feelings captured in a few words. I think about the fog of sleep clearing out of my mind in the early morning. I think of picking corn in the field with the warm rays of the sun coaxing me along. I am also getting hungry for some heavily buttered corn on the cob.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 July 2018

Over a field! ! With the romance of nature! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 July 2018

Very well penned dear Rose! I find real beauty in brevity of your poetic expression! Thanks for sharing...10

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 02 July 2018

A vivid portrayal of nature, a magnificent write.10+

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2018

Revisiting this poem values more as eagerness grows to visit such a lovely poem...10

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Savita Tyagi 28 June 2018

Lovely view image that draws mind to peace and tranquility. Thanks Marie.

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Robert Murray Smith 28 June 2018

Beautifully imaged write. This is an example for all.++10 Into my favourites it goes.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 January 2023

WHERE are YOU now, dear Robert? Missing your critics and thoughts and of course your emotive responses on our poems on PH. We reallt MISS YOU!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 June 2018

You have beautifully painted the scenery of nature in concise. Brilliant poem shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 June 2018

excellent the curtain of sun can cover the entity of fog but the fog reigns over the field where the corn's standing in queue naively..... nice natural image 10+++

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Akhtar Jawad 25 June 2018

The sun when sees that his rays scattered as love on the earth, and the earth responded it with photosynthesis, became green and finally grown the golden crops all its sorrow displayed as fog was changed in a smile of joy. Such a beautiful short poem by Rose Marie Juan Austin,

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Khairul Ahsan 21 July 2018

Wow, what a wonderful explanation, Akhtar! Many thanks.

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Kostas Lagos 25 June 2018

An optimistic image.The fog disappears as the sun is rising.Beautiful poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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