Thursday, February 18, 2016

Morning Experiences... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Whisked face gets reddened,
next day really gets darkened,
night bathed mister gets tanned,
snow rolled damsel gets sickened,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Mithilesh Yadav 19 February 2016

what a classical expression of morning........... your poem provokes the thought of morning at any moment of day or even in nights mam ji.. thanx for sharing

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 February 2016

Morning experiences in typical house hold routinely undergone by a lady of the house are wonderfully narrated. Thanks for sharing.10+ points.

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