Morning Energy Comments

Let the child remain within. Let it remain soft and tender, And no complicity it should imbibe. i liked these lines in your poem.. yes keep your child and its smile intact. those who don't care for the inner child loses a lot in their normal life. it is true.

highly energizing n encouraging poem, loved the way u expressed it.....lovely

Beautiful lines strengthened with the power of energy..... Loved reading this....... -Sanu

This poem is very positive, full of life and energy. I liked it! !

The poem speaks about positive energy.At first solar energy, then wind energy and finally wishes and kisses from his beloved energized him.The poem rotate around increasing the positive energy in him by doing good work for the people around and helping the people who really deserves.Like a child the poet need to have positive energy, where he can only think good about others and with the growing age he does not want the positive energy to replace by negative one.

grt poem...kp going....

Make me fill the objective. With your wish and kisses....i wish i knew what you mean. it sounds interesting. if i don't pay too much attention to trying to understand the words or trying to think how i would write this differently, the poem has a nice feeling/flow/sound to it. i believe i follow the main points the author is making, but i believe english is not his first language and therefor there are, understandably, some wordings which i would not use. i have been speaking english as my only language for over sixty years and i still am not an expert, AND i still write/speak in some ways for which my english teachers would scold me! thanks for sharing. i especially enjoyed the following lines: With the marching age, Let the child remain within. Let it remain soft and tender, And no complicity it should imbibe. Let it bleed with others grief, And filled with joy, when happiness around. ...i suggest putting be in front of filled. :)

I really liked the first part. The words mornings, fresh and energy......created a vibrant and happy mood: -)

its so serene and smooth very beautiful write...keep penning :)

It is nice to hear the birds songs early morning- early to bed and early to rise create positive energy

Loved it..it gives me energy for my morning tomorrow..i better sleep now hahaha...loved it you did a very good job! ! _Soul

positive energy leads to a positive life. let the child remain within let it remain soft and tender, I agree' good thoughts nice imagery

Thank you very much for sharing your poem This poem celebrates happiness, Inspire to have a optimistic approach towards life and love for nature

Very nice Poet! ! ! ! Good luck on your day!

I will open for them a horizon. With my touch, thousand smile..this is what poets/poetess do while spread the spell of their poetry, yeap morning has power in it to explore more world for us..great job

very nice poem, well penned

positive approach, honest and true regarding doing something for the people around.