Morning Brings What Years May Not Comments

you put everything together to point out what mornings AMAZINGLY bring this poem made me smile thank you.

Most dawns unseen ephemeral But each precious and precarious made my day!

Structurally, a balanced beat of the syllables like twinkle twinkle little stars...not faltering anywhere, maintaining rhthmic symphony, and thematically, an intense praise of the mornings...so nice! ! !

Years undone By morning sun

Decades of procrastination Creeping backwards to stagnation So true! For a lazy set of people who fail to live and act in the present, everything is pushed to tomorrow and progress is left in eternal stagnation!

Beautiful written poem, what a flow of rich in thought and original expressions! A loving read, it makes us think and wonder what is a life's most precious things. Thank you for share!

A good write filled with nice imagery. enjoyed this.

I wish I could write about morning like this. Phenomenal.

The true picture of our firsts and lasts...........................great