The morning breeze greeting the dawn,
Lusters the green grass of the lawn,
Tempting to rest, lie under the sun,
Lest to enjoy, in case have fun,
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Your poem deftly unites the lyrical with the philosophical, and uses Nature to reveal ideas that transcend natural realities and lead the reader to spiritual understanding. But the beauty and wonder of Nature is still present, but seen through a religious perspective. An American poet Stanley Kunitz, who was an avid gardner, said every garden with its flowers or vegetables is an echo of the original Garden of Eden.
The bloom of a flower.... a big 10++++++