Morning Breeze Comments
Morning in the Marina
a breeze hugs me
with all the freshness
of all the seven seas;
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A poem is as soothing and as genuine as the breeze in The Marina
The embrace of the breeze carries the heritage of a million years' history and poetry…. It is sheer poetry, dear friends
PH has prevented the morning breeze from sending 5 heavenly stars to you for this blissful poem. I too smiled because your poem transported me to the serenity of such a dreamy place.
Thank you Richard. I am so gratified that the poem evoked so much as a smile in you.
Well crafted piece describing the Marina beach and the treasure of beauties it encompasses.
Thank you, Nabkishore for your time and the beautiful comments
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I love beaches. In Kuwait we have several sea shore and I enjoy walking early in the morning when air is fresh and sun is gentle. Great poem
It is so nice of you to devote your time to read this poem and share such endearing thoughts. Thank you, dear poet
Thank you Anjandev, for your time and your most encouraging words. Obliged
It is beautifully inked. Early morning gives a healing touch to mind and body. Thanks.
Thank you, Anilji. Yes! Every morning, sun rises with a new hope, new energy, new dreams and new goals. Regards, dear poet
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There is nothing like the early morning breeze while sitting on a sun kissed beach. Great poem Unnikrishnan.
A morning breeze on a beach is real poetry, no doubt. And "sun kissed"? Yes, it is. The Marina faces the East. So, on most days I watch sun smiling through the waters, while I continue to walk.. Thank you, David
Excellent poem, How aptly you compared your poetry to the ocean and its immensity. Similar to the ocean, when we delve into contemplation, we witness a continuous flow of thoughts washing up on the shore one by one. Full ***** Unni Ji.
You got it right, sir. Actually, " I am carried away by the breeze as if immersed far and deep in the sanguine blue serenity of the sweet sublime poetry. " are the lines I wrote first…
I have a vivid memories of Marina beach, gone are those days when I used to visit it often and eat 'Sundals' and popcorns. Great write Unni Ji.
Sundal is the most important delicacy they sell you on the Marina. Thank you.
The morning breeze on the Marina amazing poetry, my dear friend.
I am carried away by the breeze.......I feel the essence of this mild breeze and the ecstatic mood of the poet. A magnificent poem. Top score! !
The morning breeze on the Marina reveals the essence of real poetry to you, sirj
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7/25/2025 11:14:48 AM # 1.0.0
Still resonating in my mind: 'I am carried away by the breeze as if immersed far and deep in the sanguine blue serenity of the sweet sublime poetry'. The sanguine, derived from the Latin 'blood' contrasts beautifully with the marine blue.
Thank you, Poet Alyx. The word ‘sanguine' was used deliberately by me to recreate the sense of contrasting hues with which the morning sea adorns itself. The beach thrills in the reflected glory. Thanks again