Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Morning Bird Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting on a branch bird thinks
Soon mind again in tree links
But watching new ray bird flies
To search food for day in sky.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Bharati Nayak 05 November 2015

Amazingly beautiful morning song.So well written.

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Sanjukta Nag 05 November 2015

Birds are the amazing creation of nature, and your poem has it pictured so well. Thank you.10

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M Asim Nehal 05 November 2015

And life goes on like this, with morning call everyone start their work and by evening return to their destination...Thanks for sharing, Sir.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2015

Time to time with hope. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

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Loke Kok Yee 05 November 2015

lovely poem of a morning thanks-10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 November 2015

With new dawn body and soul of even an individual gets rejuvenated as if new life has been poured into his being due to night rest. Same is the case with birds. Beautiful poem depicting nature's magic in early morning. Enjoyed it.10 points.

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Gajanan Mishra 04 November 2015

there is the new essence of life really sir, namaskar, thanks for the posting..

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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