Wednesday, September 13, 2017

Morning Bathers Comments

Rating: 5.0

I must be among the lesser gods,
To judge by the handiwork of my days:
My hours still trapped in marble blocks,
Bathing in the morning rays.
...
Read full text

Troy Cochran
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2017

My hours still trapped in marble blocks. Bathing in the memories of rays values more and such bath signifies to have bath in wisdom of God. Wisdom is light and this carries rays. Listening to the talk of the bathers amaze mind. Wisely penned deep and perceptive poem shared here...10

0 0 Reply
Troy Cochran 17 September 2017

I find that my best poetry seems to come from a playful spirit ~ when I'm just playing and amusing myself with the musicality of language and syntax, vowel sounds and consonants, yet also entertaining a profound idea, with no other care in the world but my music. Let the bills take care of themselves (at least for this hour) when there is a symphony resounding all about me, and I find myself embedded in the cosmic orchestra, one of its most quixotic and peculiar instruments. I become possessed! I must translate! ! ! Thank you for commenting. :)

0 0
Troy Cochran

Troy Cochran

Toppenish, WA
Close
Error Success