Saturday, November 2, 2013

Morning Aubade Comments

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I opened my shuttered window wide,
Hoping to soak up the colours outside
But to my utter dismay, I realized
That nature was not willing to oblige
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Aneesha Roy
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Susy Evelyne 02 November 2013

The unusual and elegant title drew me in and I enjoyed this short, poignant poem. You made the best of a disappointing morning by writing about it. Good flow and rhythm.

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