Waking up to the morning’s pattering rain,
Tapping relentlessly on the windowpane.
I struggled hard to try and ascertain,
By looking outside towards the weathervane,
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This is so eloquently carved. A poem in the life of a day. t x
You describe the changes of dawn till dusk so well Ernestine, and Ohhh that taking of, of the shoes at the end on a long day, ahhh..what a great feeling Curl up with a cup of tea in a nice comfy chair...relax Love duncan X
You write so beautifully Ernestine.....Your descriptives have an elegant touch that make the reader feel good inside....it's actually raining her, misting that is, for the first time since August and it appears our 90 degree days might have ended on Monday.....lovely poem, especially on a rare sunless day here in the east....love, marci.xo
Ernestine what a wonderful picture you paint, so relaxing. Just what I needed my friend. Beautiful. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David
I bet this took you ages to write Ernestine. Lovely rhyming structure, a real pleasure to read. Love, Andrew x