Wednesday, March 9, 2005

Morning After Comments

Rating: 3.8

the sun shoots up
and explodes like a rocket
last night's tears
still damp in his pocket
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Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler
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Goldy Locks 06 June 2007

musicforthemorningafter

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Ben No 18 April 2007

Again, I can really relate, but I'm not sure I should admit it. My girlfriend might find out and yell at me. I love 'hip-deep in strange', that's an ace line.

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Jeanette Krantz 23 February 2007

i give this an A..........

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Cj Heck 25 October 2005

Gritty, real. Well done. Warmest regards, CJ

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Uriah Hamilton 19 July 2005

I gave you another ten to continue the worthy appreciation of your work, but all this poetry can make you sad about being a human.

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Poetry Hound 09 March 2005

Hahaha. You are one crazy guy. This one wins best poem of the day.

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