the sun shoots up
and explodes like a rocket
last night's tears
still damp in his pocket
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Again, I can really relate, but I'm not sure I should admit it. My girlfriend might find out and yell at me. I love 'hip-deep in strange', that's an ace line.
I gave you another ten to continue the worthy appreciation of your work, but all this poetry can make you sad about being a human.
Hahaha. You are one crazy guy. This one wins best poem of the day.
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