Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Morning Comments

Rating: 4.9

Gladly shall I greet the morning
At the rising of the sun
All the land so bright illumined -
Hail another day begun
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Valerie Dohren
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Theodora Onken 05 March 2013

Valerie, What a delight you are to read. Am hoping that this comment takes as in the past they have not. More or less gave up. Anyway, your poetry just shines not unlike the break of day!

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Smoky Hoss 16 February 2013

Your way with words grows more wonderful each time you write.

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Kevin Halls 13 February 2013

A beautiful poem Val you show through your words how awesome nature is. You must have a fantastic vista from your window?

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Sally Plumb Plumb 08 February 2013

As beautiful as ever.

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Shahzia Batool 06 February 2013

among many morning poems, this poem is number one for its delicate graphic description and the usual Valerie Dohren brand of immaculate rhyming...! ! !

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Maria C. Pires Costa 05 February 2013

I've relished your melodious verse as much as your positive mood greeting the morning. The beautiful imagery used conveys to us brightness, light, joy and hope. Indeed, Nature in full harmony. Maria

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Danny Draper 05 February 2013

A delightful homage to the new day. Oh to let closed shutters keep, so I could have a lit' more sleep. Thank you.

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eloida Capuno 04 February 2013

beautifully crafted, made me feel waking up to a new day with all its promises.

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Neela Nath Das 31 January 2013

A bright morning with new hope and, fresh desire to live as a new person are presented beautifully. A painter you are!

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Neela Nath Das 31 January 2013

A bright morning with new hope and, fresh desire to live as a new person are presented beautifully. A painter you are!

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Wabi Sabi 30 January 2013

Wow! this is the morning that I want to be in always... ]Chilled the early scented air...I like this phrase the most of all because I always feel it when I walk on the street early morning. the same feeling as I do even though we are apart from each other. I am happy.

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Terry M 29 January 2013

I will never look at a sunrise without thinking of your poem, thank you kindly and well done!

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Marvin Brato 28 January 2013

Excellent write, truly a beautiful poem with rhythm!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 27 January 2013

Your awesome poem with rhyme and rhythm greeting the morning in your own lovely way captures the heart.

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Jahan Zeb 27 January 2013

Beautiful. This was so musical. like the song of the morning. Others might call it a welcome to the new day you called it farewell to night. I liked that way of thinking. Bidding their farewell to night Loved this one.

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Dave Walker 25 January 2013

A very beautiful flowing poem, mornings in my house are mad, my four year old giving her orders before we take her to school.

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Nader Baheri 25 January 2013

tastefully way of written about mornings.what happened if the mornings would never come.we would never heard birds chattering or dawn chorus. fabulous write.~nb

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Stevie Taite 24 January 2013

Amazing. How do you do poem after poem so beautifully rhymed? They sing to me, each one, and my heart swells! I am so glad to have found you dear poet!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 24 January 2013

A great Morning is exhibited with a wonderful description.The rhyme and rhythm captures the heart. THANKS.

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Lyn Paul 24 January 2013

What a fabulous way to wake, a wonderful start to anyones day. Thank You

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