Friday, September 5, 2008

Morning Comments

Rating: ★5.0

The shocked stars'd hurriedly left the sky
And ashes of the elfin moon still remains
The startled sky'd turned a new sleeve
Replacing her dark blanket into a brilliant blue
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OLUMIDE AYODELE
sky Ashes
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Chitra - 29 October 2009

a picturesque composition.. the play of shade and light

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Olugbenga Ayoola 05 April 2009

i really see all your effort is goog pls countinue without fed up you will get there, read my peom,

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Tolulope Akinwole 16 September 2008

you never cease to amaze me.10 for it.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 September 2008

...fine expression indeed.............10

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Marvin Brato 05 September 2008

That is good write, freshen my day! A 10.

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Sumita Datta 05 September 2008

hmm... not bad... liked it.. :)

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