Thursday, August 21, 2008

Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

My morning is here
the day has now begun
this smile I have
is forever going
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Whisper Dawn
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Adi Cox 06 July 2009

It seems to me that in this poem you have turned a corner. A new day has dawned but more than this, it represents a turning point, an inner conflict has been resolved and the strength of human spirit moves on. An inspiring poem.10/10

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