Monday, December 20, 2004

Morning Comments

Rating: 2.5

It was only a kiss.
It was only a kiss
I woke up to this morning.
It was only a kiss.
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Warren Augustus de Guzman
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Sandra Osborne 03 January 2005

Nice form, but again it bumps along and stops me from really feeling your words. Make it flow like a kiss.

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