Saturday, December 19, 2015

Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

A feather drifts softly, drowsily downward
I blow at it, and that puff of air sends it shooting back up
I am lying down, my limbs slowly, tiredly moving around
I feel like I am trapped underwater, unable to move quickly
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Cherie Mort
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Dr Antony Theodore 26 May 2016

I feel like I am trapped underwater, unable to move quickly It's nice, though, The deep end is heavy but serene I can't move, but I'm not struggling, either I'm just stuck in a world that rotates too slowly for me to care........ i saw a feather........ hope, wonder, illusion. laziness pictured in a very different ways. great imagination and very nice graphic. tha nk you dear poet. tony

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