Tuesday, January 14, 2014

Morning Comments

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Clouds the incandescent factories of dreams,
Squeezed by great hands into silver streams,
Winding through lands of dancing sunbeams,
Everywhere an enchanted smiling day gleams.
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Alexander Thomas
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Cleveland Gibson 14 January 2014

The second verse say it all to convey the theme. The first verse isn't strictly needed. But that's my opinion. Well done.

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