the blanket of night
as been removed
as the early gleam of rays
like the haze on the mountains of switzerland
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I really like this one I thought it was cute that may not be what you want to hear but it's a good thing
Ive noticed some of your poems are underrated.I love this,10/10. This one drew my attention. Morning, there are so many memories within it.
Nice use of personification. I love the gentle use of words... it has a very quiet feel to it. I like this one a lot! ~Lacey~
i really liked your poem it had such hope that i could feel a new day coming.
full of hope. beautiful imagery u have there. thanks for sharing!
beautiful poem....i felt such a morning like that before too =]
well written poem, thank you for sharing...................10