Thursday, November 3, 2005

Morn Birds, Noon Birds Comments

Rating: 3.0

the joyous chirp
of a sparrow
in the morn sky
sends a heaven into me
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john tiong chunghoo
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Michael Philips 03 November 2005

The honey ending is most interesting. What is 'nauseatic? ' I don't think you meant nauseating, did you?

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Raynette Eitel 03 November 2005

This is just beautiful, John, one of your best. Raynette

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