Wednesday, March 3, 2010

More Than Pain Comments

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You know that moment...
When your hearbeat intensifies.
And for the first time,
You really feel alive.
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Hannah Diane Williams
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That was really good. I love all of the emotion, and I love how you described things. It was very vivid. The last line of the poem really stands out to me. Sometimes that's a really hard thing for me to see. This poem sounds like mine called Letter to Myself. It has kinda the same message.

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