Monday, April 13, 2009

More Than One Comments

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My muscles hurt,
My heart burns.
I feel torn into more than one
Endlessly wandering through something
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Brittanie Thornton
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Catina Crum 16 April 2009

'I feel torn into more than one' I asked myself, 'one what? ' The imagery with the open door is just snazzy. You seem do do extraordianry well with ending your poems, because the ending is my favorite part.

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