Friday, July 21, 2006

More Than Just Friends Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw two old women today
walking arm in arm out the sliding doors of the hospital
laughing and giggling and carrying on
drawing on each others strength for support.
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Mellisa Aday
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Catastrophe King 04 August 2006

This is a beautiful piece, I liked the way you have driven the words to the finish line... just beautiful! Full vote for this one too!

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Ruby Root 22 July 2006

Hi Mellisa, This is a really nice poem. It was fun to read and kind. Excellent. Take care.

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