Wednesday, December 9, 2020

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Never will I beg someone to love me
Never again will anyone hear that plea,
When God looks down to watch and see
He won't see me begging on one knee.
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Randy McClave
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Deluke Muwanigwa 09 December 2020

Lovely. I have fallen in love with your poem.The rhymes how you just pour 'em. And still the story clear as day. There is nothing to say. A beautiful work of art from the start affecting my heart splitting my ribs apart. Advice go on a diet if you dont want to die yet.

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