Tuesday, January 30, 2007

More Than An Embrace Comments

Rating: 5.0

For the first time in nearly two weeks,
I saw your face today.
You smiled when you saw me,
And pulled me so close,
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Elizabeth Sheaffer
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Not a member No 4 04 February 2007

This is a very convincing and refreshing portrayal of longing which has a great deal of the flavour of innocence in its well crafted lines. Well developed and composed from start to end. Quality poetry, and one of your best. jim

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Original Unknown Girl 01 February 2007

Stunning expression of perfectly natural feelings of love and longing. Beautifully penned. HG: -) xx

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Joshua Fegley 30 January 2007

Well-felt and amazing as always.

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Elizabeth Sheaffer

Elizabeth Sheaffer

Mt. Airy, NC
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