For the first time in nearly two weeks,
I saw your face today.
You smiled when you saw me,
And pulled me so close,
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Stunning expression of perfectly natural feelings of love and longing. Beautifully penned. HG: -) xx
This is a very convincing and refreshing portrayal of longing which has a great deal of the flavour of innocence in its well crafted lines. Well developed and composed from start to end. Quality poetry, and one of your best. jim