Thursday, August 10, 2017

More Than A Seamstress Comments

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How exciting would it be to see her at work.
Does she hurry while sewing or does she ignore the clock?
Would my taunts motivate or would she give up when I mock?
Well I think she'll do well for a girl that needs no luck.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 August 2017

Little wonder becomes interest of expression. Amazingly drafted poem is shared.10

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Osazee Dankaro 10 August 2017

Great poem. I particularly admire the rhyming of each line per stanza. How exactly do you do that? Its really fantastic, keep this up.

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Albert Aguda 10 August 2017

Thanks a lot sire. I really appreciate your words. they don't come cheap.

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