Wednesday, February 13, 2019

More Or Less. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The more we eat,
The more we get hungry,
The more we drink,
The more we get thirsty,
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MOHAMMAD SKATI
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Hans Vr 15 February 2019

I like the very original structure of this poem, with less peace among the warmongers standing out. I quite sure myself that we are in a world where slowly wisdom and kindness are becoming more and slowly greed becoming a bit less. Once we reach a certain level of awareness among enough people, it will snowball like an avalanche and greed will be replaced by generosity and kindness all over the world. Thanks for sharing this beautiful and thought provoking poem

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Mohammad Skati 17 February 2019

I appreciate your pretty and kind words about my poem, dear poet.Thanks.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 14 February 2019

An interesting ang meaningful write..10.

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Mohammad Skati 17 February 2019

Thank you so much, dear poet, for your pretty words.Thanks.

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