Monday, September 12, 2016

More Like A Fable! Comments

Rating: 4.8

There was a place
Where there was no grace
It was a little island
That had much sand
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Clarence Prince
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Bri Edwards 07 November 2016

this must be made into a movie. Johnny Depp? Wallace Beery? something different from Clarence, but i suspect it is tied to religion. oh well, i don't mind. as long as the island has McDonalds AND Burger King AND Wendy's. i like to vary my diet. to Section B of November's showcase. thanks. bri :)

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Mary-lisa Russo 24 September 2016

Vivid imagery! Enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing!

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Susan Williams 20 September 2016

You painted a very real picture of this daunting island and I truly hope if I am ever shipwrecked I do not land on its sands! ! ! Yet... you added buccaneers with such naughty pirate names and now I wonder if there is a treasure hidden there under the sands..... enjoyed the playful imagination on show here! ! !

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Valsa George 15 September 2016

Enjoyed this highly rhyming poem....... A very interesting read.....! I wonder if there is such a place....! However you have made it a real entity by the power of your imagination and your ability for versification!

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