There was a place
Where there was no grace
It was a little island
That had much sand
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You painted a very real picture of this daunting island and I truly hope if I am ever shipwrecked I do not land on its sands! ! ! Yet... you added buccaneers with such naughty pirate names and now I wonder if there is a treasure hidden there under the sands..... enjoyed the playful imagination on show here! ! !
Enjoyed this highly rhyming poem....... A very interesting read.....! I wonder if there is such a place....! However you have made it a real entity by the power of your imagination and your ability for versification!
this must be made into a movie. Johnny Depp? Wallace Beery? something different from Clarence, but i suspect it is tied to religion. oh well, i don't mind. as long as the island has McDonalds AND Burger King AND Wendy's. i like to vary my diet. to Section B of November's showcase. thanks. bri :)