Sunday, September 27, 2015

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of course, you are right
about metrics and rhymes,
but in this simple form -
it reminds me of God.
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Liza Sud
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Rajnish Manga 27 September 2015

Thanks for this small, amazing poem which seems to be a lovely reply to the skeptics who voice their concern about purity of technical points in poetry. I love it. of course, you are right / about metrics and rhymes / but in this simple form - / it reminds me of God.

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