Wednesday, September 30, 2020

More Lazy Poets Lockdown Concerns Comments

Rating: 5.0

With local lockdown procedures now being implemented across the UK,
Some lazy poets are voicing their concerns to local authorities.
On receiving no advice on how to do the washing up,
Iron a shirt,
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Shaun Cronick
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Dominic Windram 01 October 2020

A welcome and most humourous addition to your orgiinal Lazy Poets poem Shaun! I really appreciate the ending with the internal rhyme scheme (long vowelled assonance) of ' sloth, ' ' slowly' and ' dozed'...it works a treat! It's definitely not a slow, but a fast and furious five from me!

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