More Lazy Poets Lockdown Concerns Poem by Shaun Cronick

More Lazy Poets Lockdown Concerns

Rating: 5.0


With local lockdown procedures now being implemented across the UK,
Some lazy poets are voicing their concerns to local authorities.
On receiving no advice on how to do the washing up,
Iron a shirt,
Boil an egg.
Or how to get out of their own bed.
It's a travesty, one lazy poet half yawned.
He added,
We're being treated like sloth.
Then slowly dozed off.

Wednesday, September 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: laziness,lazy,poets
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dominic Windram 01 October 2020

A welcome and most humourous addition to your orgiinal Lazy Poets poem Shaun! I really appreciate the ending with the internal rhyme scheme (long vowelled assonance) of ' sloth, ' ' slowly' and ' dozed'...it works a treat! It's definitely not a slow, but a fast and furious five from me!

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