Sunday, May 1, 2005

More Haiku Practice Comments

Rating: 3.9

A sniffer doggie
went to the outback outhouse
the door was bolted.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Colleen Courtney 29 April 2014

A little confused by some of these yet some are very well written!

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Scarborough Gypsy 02 May 2005

Talent lingers on The crest of a wave briefly But for just how long? xx Gyp's

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Herbert Nehrlich1 01 May 2005

A 'one' is proper to give to real poets if you can't cut it. Haiku to fit this one. H

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