Wednesday, July 4, 2012

More Beautiful Yesterday Comments

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Where does love go?
Does it leave the soul and the mind?
Oh, tell me where my parents keep it!
How can you make it last for all time?
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Rachel Henley
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Emily Oldham 12 July 2012

Like the metaphors you use here. Beautiful poem, but maybe a different title might fit the poem as a whole better?

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Shouvik Roy 04 July 2012

reminded me of the song by the beatles named yesterday..good one.. :)

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