Monday, December 21, 2015

Morbidity Comments

Rating: 4.5

Morbid thoughts and death desires burning flesh and rings of fire.
Life of pain no ground to gain..look in my mind and you will find the halls of hell with blood drenched walls

The end in sight I lose the fight....
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Paul Weidner
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Chinedu Dike 21 January 2016

Deep depression - a total loss of sunshine of a soul at its lowest ebb of existence, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. An insightful depiction of depression at its worst. Thanks for sharing Paul. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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