black nails
a dark soul
half a heart
never again whole
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Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! You take the raw pain and throw it at the page with such energy that it cannot be ignored great work Erika another 10
I agree with Paddy, you have put everything into this poem making it very meaningful to the reader. A very good piece of work by an up coming poetest. Your friend Lynn