Morals Comments

the first stanza gave me trouble at first. after rereading i may be approaching understanding. i think it may be saying that 'moral conduct'/morals help to keep man from doing things offensive to others. maybe i should say GOOD morals? i believe what is considered (good) morals [a moral conscience? ] can vary between different individuals and different societies. the first stanza may be too philosophical for me to feel comfortable with. as for this: He is his own worst enemy, , i believe it is referring to certain individuals or groups of humans (men & women) being a danger to other individuals or groups, BUT that raises the image of bad morals. i give up! :) not quite............. the second stanza is more my speed, talking about Nature, but not quite literally, seemingly equating a man with molecules of water. BUT, the third stanza sort of comes to my rescue, mentioning dream. and there IS a dreamlike quality to stanza 2. this poem has now been entered into my/our AUGUST 2016 'a showcase for P H poets', to be found in my list of poems on my P H site. thanks Akhtar! bri :)

a poem about true love. a society we called heaven/jannat. very nice poem

A great philosophic poem, when man ignored nature then he start ed needing morals.

Reading this poem offers a lovely feeling....! Life in all its beauty and color is presented and the invitation to fall in love with everything that is beautiful.....! A very relaxing write!

You write about grand concepts with such eloquent language. A 10 from me as well

Superb write from your poetic pen. Enjoyed every single word of it. A big 10