Philip Housiaux

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Monday, April 14, 2008

Morality Or Mutation Comments

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Into lives false prophets amble
posing: villains or nature’s gamble?
Eggs cosmic radiation’s banquet
cruel near death doses of rads
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Philip Housiaux
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Chitra - 30 January 2009

Interesting theme...so very well thought out!

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Irene Clark-hogg 20 May 2008

Top marks certainly for your thoughts and use of language. I enjoyed your use of rhyme though I found the uneveness of the pattern a little disconcerting. Keep writing and I will enjoy reading. Irene

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Man's identity seems the key word of this poem. Then many people like produce monsters, for aggressivity. And, always, because are afraid of natural identity.

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Ivor Hogg 19 April 2008

intriguing writing Philip Loved your use of words/ Language eveolves overages but it is apparently devolving at the present day.I am an old fashioned formalist and very proud of my vocabulary and my ability to rhyme and use meter. I think that the presnt free form writing is just a passing phase ivor

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Lynda Robson 18 April 2008

Interesting subject matter in this one Philip, and a great title, I found it quite deep and meaningful, Lynda

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David Desantis 14 April 2008

whoa, alot to digest in this one. I'm not sure I fully understand all of it, but I do really love the combination of words. I definately see the duality of the scientific disease vs the moral constructs we put up. The last line is perfect also. Great stuff, I'll have to check out more of your work. Check out my stuff if you get a chance

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