Moral Responsibility Comments
Hey Rapster Drake
Make no mistake
No kinda fake
Too much at stake
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A poem that could be composed into a rap song and a tap dance. Enjoyed the rhythmic metre, Richard! Let's stop the killin' And let's start chillin' Instead of all the hatin' How 'bout some kinda lovin' An important message strongly woven within the song that rhymes is life. To live a life of Ahimsa - Non Violence. A life of love and peace. As always you have made your point through this beautiful poem. A full vote, once again. Thank you Richard for sharing your benign thoughts.
Geeta, thank you so very much for your very positive insightful comments. Yes, it's being transformed into a rap song. I never thought of a tap dance, but I think that would be pretty cool. Drake is struggling with his conscience over a few deaths. This poem/song was written to assist him in making some moral choices. Hopefully, he'll listen.
Yes, this brings Drake nearer and clearer to me. He must understands his moral responsibility- now & always. Thanks a lot. Ten shots out of the blue Where's the security crew? Lend a meaningful hand To the law of the land.... Start cooperatin'
Thank you so much, Rajnish. I'm so happy that the message is getting through to people. Let's pray it gets through to Drake!
a brilliant poem that tells a story of life in the rap lane? never mind a song it would make a good film! ....................wonderfully written Richard
Tom, you just made my day! Nobody's ever told me that my poem would make a good film. Thank you so very much with your overwhelmingly positive response.
A strong write, focused and factual. Very heartfelt! Brave outcry with a call for moral responsibility and universal brotherhood of man. Thanks for sharing Richard.
Thank you, Chinedu. This one is being transformed into a song which I sincerely hope Drake will listen to. Maybe he won't do the right thing, but it might shake him up a bit.
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7/27/2025 8:12:34 PM # 1.0.0
Richard, this is terrific. Are think these lyrics are done, set, and ready to to be performed. You mention Drake, but I keep hearing Slim Shady....awesome, Richard.
Thank you so very much, M.J. Getting the green light from you is awesome. Drake is at the center of the whole. The song is meant to appeal to his conscience. I know that he's really struggling with the mentioned deaths. And that he wants to do what's right. Hopefully, the song will help him move in the right direction.