Tuesday, August 5, 2008

Moral Philosophy Comments

Rating: 4.8

From the Freedom Tower located nearby,
To the sparkling stars beneath the sky,
A new, moral philosophy rises,
Too Intricate to be seen at naked eyes.
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COMMENTS
Brittany graviet 13 September 2008

very inspiring, maybe change the last line in the first verse to make it fit a bit better though.

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Evaughn Gray 21 August 2008

wow...Jhonny that was a really reall good poem i loved it, i love the way it rhymes: D ~Hazel G.E

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Jhonny Thermidor

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