Monday, September 18, 2017

Moose Junction Comments

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I still like to break the ice
Of puddles where I can.
At the junction down a ways
I'm a bull in a china shop;
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Troy Cochran
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Captain Cur 26 September 2017

A morning curiosity, keenly observed, turned into a great write. I wonder how the Moose would have expressed his thoughts upon seeing you on that cold January morning.

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Troy Cochran 26 September 2017

He was probably snickering in that goofy way they have, having got to all the ice before me, sounding something like Bull Winkle. :)

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Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken 18 September 2017

Beautiful poem Troy Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Troy Cochran 19 September 2017

Thank you, Mario. I have since moved to Oregon, where the ice is not so prevalent, and the moose are less talented. My dancing days are needing a revival.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 September 2017

Breaking ice while having journey in life at a junction seeing a dancing man amazes mind. Early at the morning wonderful perception was acquired. Brilliantly penned humorous poem is shared here.10

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Troy Cochran 19 September 2017

Thank you, Kumarmani. You probably don't have to deal with moose in India, just things like tigers and typhoons. Count your blessings. Moose are a handful. :)

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