Moonwake Comments

A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. An insightful piece of poetry nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm.

Moon wakes over there on the blue sky and peeps us with the self light and lit up the in-out path of every dark of life

A nice poem with a nice graphic. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'! My brother Sun from another mother, He likes to hang, sometimes hover. My dear Cloud, your rising sun, the rascal hides beneath your cover! ' - Loved these last four lines.

Hats off to the flight of imagery, comparing Sun and moon as step brother and sister. Heartiest congrats on well deserved poem of the Day.

From black to blue! ! With the romance of nature! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A nice poem with a beautiful flow. Liked it. 'My brother Sun from another mother, He likes to hang, sometimes hover. My dear Cloud, your rising sun, the rascal hides beneath your cover! '...is beautiful. Congrats.

Nice poem. Congrats being POD

Lovely imagery so often seen and enjoyed just the way poem recalls it.

Very nice image. Congrats for selection t POD.

pin point mocking moon above a weeping willow

beautiful poem; beautiful expression.........

She laughs and softly whispers The game is up and I'm done My brother Sun from another mother, He likes to hang, sometimes hover. beautiful, wonderful imagination. tony

Superb elaboration....love it

When it is night sleep., don't linger into the morning. Am I right? Congratulations, Philo!

Enchanting! Congratulations on poem of day!

Wonderful poem of the day, Ma'am Philo. Congrats for being selected....10+++++++++

The skies have turned from black to blue, what on Earth has happened to you? Did you forget to take your break? The morning's here, go back to bed! Your stars have left, it's way too late! Don't linger long, don't even wait! Beckon now your brighter other, the Sun, your flaming brother! ...beautiful expression