Friday, August 5, 2005

Moonstruck Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to give you a Tokyo cityscape
and sleepless nights to go with
that smile.
maybe then you’d appreciate… but instead I’ll just
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Maggie Flanagan-Wilkie 05 August 2005

Wow, this is terrific. I'd suggest looking at your line breaks again. Your phrasing produces some wonderful imagery.I love 'You have sung me moonstruck' Just one of many fine verses.

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